You wrote 634 words and 120 lines to examine "dark matter" and "dark energy" - two concepts explored in physics. You used scientific facts and knowledge gained through your readings to:
1. ask tough questions (what's happens when I reach 100%)
2. to unpack the mystery (which leaves us with 5% of what)
3. to describe energy (the world is full of dark energy)
4. To canvas the neighborhood (In my neighbor you see kids and teens...
As I mentioned today, you are in the universe and the universe is in you (e.g., hair waves and ocean waves).
Every word you read and write is a one step toward freedom.
.1 Percent Full
By
A.W. Tatum
Darkness is more complex than light
Man’s mystery travels through a city founded by a darker brother
The criminal and civil cases halves the people
The salt from Lake Michigan
Gives the entire city emotional blood pressure
That presses me to scream Black Lives Matter
In a universe that is 2/3 dark matter
There’s no wonder why my neighborhood
Feels let down
Instead of lifted
Caught between light and darkness
Love and madness
Promise and Pain
It is hard to be whole in a universe that is almost empty
We are born
into a dark world
Full of negative energy
Our brain
weighs less than a laptop
But has more brain cells than books in a library
But has more brain cells than books in a library
The world is
so empty
But seems so
full
Almost half
my city's population is criminals
They lock us
up like animals
They judge
us by how we appear
And not by
how we think or feel
The earth is
polluted
But the air
still smells fresh to me
Our lake
looks so dirty
But our
ocean water looks so tasty
I’m from the
windy city
Where a lot
of lives are taken
JN
Growing Up IN Low Income Housing
Mama Struggling To Keep Food
On The Table No One Likes To See
Their Mother Struggle So I Was
Forced
To Go Out And hustle - 12 Years old
Standing On a Corner Thinking About
The Path Between Light And Darkness.
Feeling The 99.9 Percent Of The
Emptyness
The Universe Has To Offer
No Father Figure
To Right Me From Wrong No Choice
But
To Absorb all Of The Dark Energy
The
Dirty Streets Has To Offer
I am at 70% Percent Now
I am at 70% Percent Now
Lord Father Forgive Me
For What I Do When I reach 100%
For What I Do When I reach 100%
DM
Light Or Dark , Dark Or Light
My city the city of Chicago is full
of crime all during the day,
Because kids running the streets
and parents barely have a stable place to stay,
The value of my city is 2.7 million. and
1.2 Are criminals of the state
1.2 Are criminals of the state
Whether you're light or dark
you still can be a victim of poverty in my city
you still can be a victim of poverty in my city
Street corners are gold minds and
war zones
It's Easy ways to get money running
the streets or being a criminal
Now a days the judges lynch us with
100 years use to hang us by a tree
Life is a sacrifice and it's your
choice if you make it dark or light – E.j
This City Has A Story To Tell
They say the Universe Is Full Of Things But 99.9% of the physical world is empty.
Dark matter is a mysterious substance making up most of the material universe
when 2/3 of the universe is dark matter. Chicago has 2.7 million people 45% white, 33% black, 28% Latino or Hispanic but founded by a
black men jean Baptiste point du Sable. We have 1.2 million criminal and civil
cases but 13 courthouses. 70% is dark energy 25% is dark matter which leaves us with 5% of what?
RR
Darkness in Chicago
While invisible matter takes up 26.8% in the universe, 68.3%
of the matter is nowhere to be found. Or is it? Dark matter is everywhere. there is currently 1.2 civil and criminal
cases open about half the population of the city. The darkness isn’t in sight
but the yellow tape is.
NS
Dark city
Where I came from is a place
where people don’t really care or thinks about education. In my neighborhood
you’ll see kids and teens in the streets doing bad stuff while they're supposed to
be in school. 25 percent of students wouldn’t graduate from high school and 15 percent wouldn’t
make it to high school. 90 percent of the kids and teens are more likely to be
gang affiliated. 70 percent of my neighborhood is dark energy.
OC
Live and Die in Chicago
In Chicago black and brown people be dying 'cause of these
streets
They say 'cause they
bad people but I say there’s a background behind 'em
Brain weighs 3lbs but
it feels like 20lbs because all the negativity they giving us
The sun is out at 9
am but i be in my dark mind without no one asking how I feel
I see a lot of red
tape in these streets but not enough graduations.
JC
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